day today

Exhausted and on fire, heart cold.
Fools gold, under pressure and smoked.
Like your pot grows.
Feed and heat. Light glows.
meet and greet.
Burn, inhale.
Life slows.
Clean and repeat.

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kick.ass.lass's picture

Exhausted and expired, Cold

Exhausted and expired,
Cold heart on fire
Baby, I'm sorry
You got burned.

Told you to run
While you still can.
Please don't break
My heart for fun.

palewingedpoetess's picture

GREAT POT metaphor!

Love your use of the less is more way of writing. Of the three you have shared so far I believe this one is your best. Keep sharing, Oh, and welcome to our big little poetic community. I think you will like it here. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.

Tacoman5000's picture

Greetings!

Thank you for your welcoming me I was inspired to join by shana she is an amazing writer. Im off to see what else life throws at me to write about! Cheers!
Ryan c.


Live for the ones who love you.
Make mistakes, learn from them.
They will still love you.