I wrote this haiku many years ago for a creative writing class in college. It is about an experience I had while walking on a beach in Santander, Spain.
13 March 2003 - 9:54pm — Gwen Samuels (not verified)
ok, its haiku so it couldnt have much meaning behind it anyway..but you have one work, why dont you write more? try some freeverse? just constructive criticism, thanks. check out mine if ya want
~gwen~
Beautiful
Melissa Marina Flores
It almost comes across as spiritual.
i love this poem
That Hiku is nice. Its like the kind that let you picture whatever you want. I think it is real nice. Take a look at some of my poems if you like.
Sweet!
ok, its haiku so it couldnt have much meaning behind it anyway..but you have one work, why dont you write more? try some freeverse? just constructive criticism, thanks. check out mine if ya want
~gwen~
it always amazes me how a true poet can express so much with so few words
I loved this
Simple yet beautiful.
Very good. Hope that you post more....will check back.
WOW! Great haiku, I hope you got an A++++ for it! Hope you write some more soon
i like it because i lived near the ocean for several years...they do call to people at times...don't they?
I'm not much into haiku's, but for some reason I really like this one! Good posting!