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Don’t you just hate pants
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2013
We have started hugging each other like we don’t want to stop
Like if we pull apart we may die or never touch again
Like we want to do more but fear the falling out
Like we both know we are falling for each other
But neither of us is willing to ruin the friendship
Because lets face it
You and I
We are cut from different cloth
Silk rubbing against burlap
Trying to form something fashionable
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What I love about this poem is it is so Rabbit; so balanced, so on edge. Pierce through everything, lay each thing naked, yet still see the ambiguities that confuse and manage to trip up us all. and a line like "Silk rubbing against burlap" is just to die for! ;-)
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this is a good week for my 'writer's ego' it has been paid many a complement :)
thanks Beavis, as always, you know how to make me smile and I really enjoyed how you described my writing
Much Love
Ashley
UgH~!
That ending~!
Those Lines~!
*Swoon*
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
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oh I know the silk makes you wanna swoon but just saying be careful how much you move, the burlap with rub ya raw ;)
Much Love
Ashley
New introspective Respected RWR
New introspective Respected RWR. The word "burlap" reminded me of "The Hound of Baskerville"'''' glowing...
©bishu
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interesting.... gaint mystery dogs found only in one grove eh......
Much Love
Ashley
Grimpen Mire Respected RWR
"Grimpen Mire" Respected RWR
©bishu
And mostly love how you wrote
And mostly love how you wrote the last ine!! (read it 3 times so far...lol)
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
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:)
Much Love
Ashley
I think you may have started
I think you may have started a new fashion trend.
http://lhcalligraphy.com/08-30-12-invitations-burlap-silk-by-blue-magpie
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
omg
lol what are the odds...hmmm so we could be wedding invitations :/ I feel like a new poem is brewing
Much Love
Ashley
good job :)
I lovee this!! :D
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thanks glad you liked it
Much Love
Ashley
Love and Burlap
Silk and sow's ear - the latest fashion for the Fall. Pigs in a blanket with silk sheets and storage capacity in a burlap clutch bag - EVERYONE will be wearing them (ha!) Opposites attract and merge baby! - grinning, I am yr pal, ~Lady A~
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oh allets you ALWAYS know when I need your kind words the most! and once again you have not failed in cheering up the uncheer-able! You never know your impact my love! keep being you!
Much Love
Ashley