A poem as socially awkward as the jokes that made me love you (and just as poorly worded)

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We dance our dance of anger
Like Hitler to a Jew
Always I am naked
Shammed in front of you

We live our lives wide open
Like a hooker in the south
Always I am hollowed
By the words that leave your mouth

We lie about all the old lovers
Sleeping between our bones
Always I am broken here
As we play our game of thrones

We dance our dance of anger
One oppressed, one free
Always I am defeated
In your need for victory

Author's Notes/Comments:

this one might not stay posted long
I do not like it
it sits wrong with me in my soul

last updated 18 May 2013 - 8:50pm
©16 August 2012 - 8:36am — running_with_rabbits

1 March 2013 - 12:39pm — INKSTAIN

Emphatic applause for the lines:

"Always I am naked
Shammed in front of you

We live our lives wide open
Like a hooker in the south
Always I am hollowed
By the words that leave your mouth"

3 March 2013 - 5:58pm — running_with_rabbits

Much Love

Ashley

17 August 2012 - 9:18am — xMattx

Your poems are all so unique and original. It's amazing how diverse you are, and the titles are really entertaining. Keep it up!

17 August 2012 - 5:55pm — running_with_rabbits

:) thank you
I needed that smile just then
don't be a stranger!

Much Love

Ashley

17 August 2012 - 9:18am — xMattx