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Communication
The road ahead is very long and narrow.
No one to turn to
Everything seems so distant and faint
I can't reach anyone
Love is life's way of saying, "I'm here. If you need help-just look. But, not too closely."
Yet, when I look-all I see is confusion and torment.
Is this the "Love" that everyone told me of?
This place of darkness is suppose to be happiness?
I don't understand. Was I reading too much into it?
I always thought love was to be pure, fresh and exciting.
You know, where you meet that special person and sparks fly.
But, why is everything so dark and lonely?
Love is suppose to be "togetherness".
What went wrong?
What changed things?
WAIT...I see something.
Communication? YES! That's it!!
But, what does that mean?
Communication=Love is a 2-way street.
One doesn't work without the other.
Now, I see light and feel refreshed.
The door to communication has been opened.
PSSSST.....I also thought I saw a spark!
really a good poetess you are,,,read few poems ..liked them specially this one..intersting , heart catchy idea and impressive..hope you go through my poems too and do comments..I am peace wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peace....here is my famous say for peace...((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq )))
Wow.. This is tantalizingly entertaining and heartwarming.. Good way to express this subject of "comunitcation"..
A thought provoking and highly revealing piece, Kim1 Perhaps, it is the poem's rhetorical essence in style that defines its moving message. Thank you so much, Kim, for this: 'Communication" I am enriched for having read this1 Ugonna