Very good, umm i hate to do this but there is a spelling mistake that you might want to correct. you did a great job hideing who this pome is really 4. it toke Stephan to tell me who it was 4 i won't say the persons name in case he reads this critique. but this also kinda made a small part of my heart want to cry which comes few and rare it's all abotu giving some one you love your trust and life which is important in a realtionship and you said it in a clear very beautiful way
Way to go keep it up
Very good, umm i hate to do this but there is a spelling mistake that you might want to correct. you did a great job hideing who this pome is really 4. it toke Stephan to tell me who it was 4 i won't say the persons name in case he reads this critique. but this also kinda made a small part of my heart want to cry which comes few and rare it's all abotu giving some one you love your trust and life which is important in a realtionship and you said it in a clear very beautiful way
Way to go keep it up