Angel

To put my heart

into your hand,

would be to trust you

with my life.



To ask your trust

and for your love,

to be loved by you

would be a miracle.



Tp have those words

just three words,

would be like,

talking to an angel.

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Frances's picture

Very good, umm i hate to do this but there is a spelling mistake that you might want to correct. you did a great job hideing who this pome is really 4. it toke Stephan to tell me who it was 4 i won't say the persons name in case he reads this critique. but this also kinda made a small part of my heart want to cry which comes few and rare it's all abotu giving some one you love your trust and life which is important in a realtionship and you said it in a clear very beautiful way
Way to go keep it up