Living life alone
bleeding on my own.
I don't want your help
leave me by myself.
All you do is cause me pain
leaving me yet with nothign to gain.
I do not actually live alone
I have my friends.
They usually know nothing
and can help me not.
Still yet I feel alone
alone and stranded.
Living life alone and
bleeding on my own.
I really enjoyed this poem. Actually, I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I would appreciate it if you would read my poems and give me some advice.
wow this is an extremely passionate piece of poetry i really hope that this is not how you really feel but if it is i am here to help you through this time
i really like this one i can identify alot to it
Woah! Your poem is really good! I like it almost as much as I like cheese!!!! Still followed by the word yet is not proper grammer darn you... but other then that it rawks! Morbid and depressing just how I like it!
I really like it...It says how i feel quite often...