"skintellation firmament"
You tilt your face toward
the dim hallway light,
and a scatter of freckles
gathers its quiet pattern,
as if dusk had paused here,
choosing your skin
for its small lanterns.
I follow them the way
travellers follow sky‑marks:
not for direction,
but for the calm that comes
from recognising a shape
that keeps returning.
Some sit close, like
companions in soft conversation;
others keep their distance,
content to glimmer alone,
each one a tiny proof
that brightness can settle anywhere.
And when you shift — only slightly —
their arrangement changes,
a slow drift across a private firmament,
a kind of line that usually closes a scene,
but instead there’s the faintest movement at your jaw.
.
Excellent!!! And that second
Excellent!!! And that second stanza is one of the finest I have ever read, in over half a century of reading poetry.
Starward-Called [in Chrismation, Januarius)
The face of a loved one opens
The face of a loved one opens up the skies in our eyes!
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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