"new rhythms"

 

 

"New Rhythms"



In the steady glow of the laptop

we swap plate sizzle for microwave drone,

a single-serve pour-over in a ceramic mug

replacing Mum’s chipped china

as we scroll through group chats at seven.


By dusk we binge episodes

on battered couches unmoored by gum trees,

together yet apart in our separate corners,

a pizza box on the coffee table

where once the esky kept its promise.


Morning now arrives with a run

along the river’s serene edge—

no tins of tea to set the pace,

just the steady beat of trainers on tar

and the soft ping of incoming emails.


Still, I catch the ghost of that arvo warmth,

a faint hiss of charcoal on the wind,

the sticky smear of Vegemite toast

lingering in my dreams— proof

that innocence, once lost, never fades entirely.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

 

 

In sunburnt suburbs, evenings once drew us onto the back verandah—coals glowing under gum trees, cicadas droning, Mum’s Vegemite toast cooling in chipped china, and the old Holden gleaming on the drive. As life sped up, those moments slipped away, leaving quiet spaces where laughter and ritual once lived. I’ve captured that gentle fading in verse—what family tradition have you quietly let slip, and how does its absence still resonate for you?


Generate an image inspired by the poem "New Rhythms": A modern Australian scene with a laptop glow replacing the barbie coals, a ceramic mug of pour-over coffee instead of chipped china, group chats on screens at dusk, and a pizza box on a coffee table. Morning features a serene river run with trainers on tar and the faint hiss of charcoal on the wind.

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C03ru135c3n5's picture

You describe the way we live

You describe the way we live very well.  For all of our online connections. we severely lack the connections with our family traditions and historic heritages.  I have been blessed to begin recovering the most important one of mine, but I can never recover the time I robbed from it to waste on lesser and smaller "disconnections."


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  Thank you for sharing this,

 

Thank you for sharing this, StarSpared. It really resonates that in chasing endless online connections we can lose touch with the rituals and stories that ground us and it’s encouraging to hear of your having reclaimed yours now. While we can’t get back those “disconnections,” every small step we take to revive that heritage is a meaningful act of restoration. I’d love to hear more about what traditions you’re rediscovering and how they’re reshaping your daily rhythm.


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I have been privileged to

I have been privileged to become more dependent on my Faith, first of all; then those two comments you posted some days ago keep my screen name at StarSpared.  And, in my old age, I have become more appreciative and cognizant of moments of importance from my adolescent past.  Should the Lord choose to keep me alive long enough, the days and dates of 2027 will align, after February 28th, exactly as they were in 1976 which, from Holy Week through New Years' Eve was the most intensely transformative year of my life.  Every few days, there will be a reconnection to experience.

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What happens after traditions

What happens after traditions fall by the wayside, they may be unkept but sublimate into "new rhythms."




here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver