unlikely wedded minds

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Unlikely Wedded Minds

 

A teacup’s pale steam curls  

beneath the lamp’s warm halo,  

squiggled words bleeding  

onto jaundiced pages.  

 

When you read,  

you’ll hear only a shadow—  

no tremor of my breath,  

no inflection to guide you.  

 

Yet—  

none to aid but yourself,  

as you pick tender words  

in this silent vineyard.  

 

Press their juice, let it ferment  

in the hush of your own breath.  

 

Then—  

perhaps in that red cup  

our meanderings will meet,  

and my absent voice  

will dance in your ear.  

 
 
 
 
 
 
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I love the process this poem

I love the process this poem describes, and the succinct but powerful way the language functions.


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Thank you so much. And

Thank you so much. And language is indeed powerful when we pay close attention to it and respect it.


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