read to your satisfaction

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2013

Take that bold step up to my words, linger until they have had their fill, each party imbuing the other, overflowing with the permeate of life. Read to your satisfaction, but read: free your mind upon these winged lines and read to your absolute satisfaction!


Immerse yourself in a tapestry of thoughts, each thread revealing a new pattern, weaving complexity into your consciousness. Let the current of insight pull you in, drawing you away from the mundane, into a river of boundless meaning.


Traverse the maze of ideas, where every turn unveils a fresh perspective, a hidden treasure waiting to be discovered. Navigate the halls of contemplation, guided by curiosity’s compass, unlocking gates to new realms of understanding.


Engage in the dance of words and emotions, each movement in sync with your heartbeat, a rhythm resonating deep within your soul. Feel the surge of inspiration flood through you, sparks flying into vivid, living art, thoughts transformed into creations.


Let the symphony of language embrace you, each note striking a resonant chord, a blend of intellect and passion. Allow the harmonies of wisdom and insight to echo in your mind, filling the silence with profound resonance.


Take that bold step up to my words, linger until they have had their fill, each party imbuing the other, overflowing with the essence of life. Read to your satisfaction, but read: free your mind upon these winged lines and read to your absolute satisfaction!




Author's Notes/Comments: 

~from 2013, revised and expanded from it micropoetic form.

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S74rw4rd123d's picture

This is a MARVELOUS

This is a MARVELOUS invitation, and I applaud the beauty of your language.  I am thankful for this site, and the internet in general, that has allowed me to connect to your work.


Starwardized [fka Starward]

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For some we connect but once

For some we connect but once and that once may not be enough, so the onus on us is to connect well. Sad news from Texas, just a few hours ago; my first cousin (60) died suddenly, her brother, my other cousin, having passed 30 years ago after returning home from serving in the Gulf War. The last time we were in a room together was in 1978 a few days before they left for Austin. Part of me has shrivelled away. Sorry to bother.


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S74rw4rd123d's picture

First . . . nothing you send

First . . . nothing you send me is ever a bother.  I am sorry for the present loss, the separation that hurts, but will eventually be repaired in Heaven.  You are right about connecting well, and I am glad and grateful to the Lord that you and I have connected through this site.  I have prayed for you, that the sense of shrivelling will be assuaged.  And although I am clumsy in expressing the right words at a time like this, my heart and motive are sincere..  


Starwardized [fka Starward]

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My heartfelt gratitude goes

My heartfelt gratitude goes out to you. I'm not sure how I responded to your comment with that. It was meant to be on a different post altogether. But, it doesn't appear to have caused much confusion. Perhaps the grieving process is a fluid one in that it seems to change and have nuanced distinctions with each case. Thanks for the comfort brought by your much appreciated words. 


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