"baby blue"
i remember the day
when u had something
so important to say
you said u were pregnant
i said ok
i'll take responsibility
for are fertility
i'll provide the facility
we have the ability
but then u made a descion
that was not my vision
are minds had a collision
you decided to have an abortion
no adoption just contortion
i lost my good fortune
the riches i had lost to abortion
i was sad, so tore up
i remember for a week i threw up
so u went and got your check up
took care of business, got all cut up
then you came by and said whats up
like i would be fine with it all
but that why i left u a note
haning on the wall
in the back hall
i couldn't dare face you
i know its what u had to do
and it was just as hard on u
but i had a kid, but that u blew
i could have taken the baby from u
gave it a life thats new
but now i must conclude
that i'm not trying to be rude
i'm stuck in minds solitude
i'm all baby blue
It's really interesting to hear about abortion from the male perspective.
wow... your poetry is great and I really liked this one. the emotion presented in this one really got to me. the feelin you gave off of pain and helplessness really has an effect of the reader... excellent poem
A feeling of despair and powerlessness. As I keep sailing through your poetry, keep discovering little notes on society.