"No Greater Fury"

Feeling alone and unprotected

my soul laid bare and raw with pain,

My love lies ravaged and forsaken

in that place where faith once reigned,



So near a cripple almost conquered

by my own love by my own trust,

Is now a dagger that's turned inward

I trade my weakness for self disgust,



With mine eyes so fiercely open

and my heart now armored well,

I face this world a mighty being,

no greater fury lives in hell,



With fresh scars and battle-weary

my love safely locked away,

Sanity an unknown savior

I hope to keep the ghosts at bay,



With gentle words and soft carresses

adoring eyes to heal my soul,

Wishing only but to love me

learning only to let me go,



What I have learned has cost me dearly

with each bittersweet fare-well

There is no greater pain than heartbreak

no greater fury here in hell,...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

love betrayed is a very painful thing,,and how you react to that betrayal can effect your mind and your decisions,,you can falter in your sorrow and rage,,but hopefully you will come out of it,, as I did,,eventually..

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Jen's picture

Lisa,
OMG girlfriend that is beautiful!! You have a talent! Keep writing as I will return often to see your words.
Jen

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nice work sista look forward to reading more.
Mahalo this is dakine!