Piled On

If you keep climbing the hill,

You are going to wear it down

Or get used to the elevation.

I know this could be

A victory if

I’m able to live

To explain it to them.

But maybe that’s what

Prevents this from being victory.

Poetry as record

Or failure.

You as the woman

Who would embrace

Or diminish

Just by enveloping.

These were cruel games

And you said

They were the same game.

You told me this is living.

Or maybe these are the games you play

When you give up on living.

I gave up on living

Because if not

I knew they’d see me.

They see

A calm ghost now.

I know it’s my victory.

I don’t know if

I wore down the hill

But I’m used to the elevation,

Even with the dirt

Piled on.

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