Not Poetry

I took the city

And called it Los Angeles.

I called the Palace ugly

And named the rest London.

Pompously,

I explained to the East Indian woman,

Not of East India

Where LA is.

I tried figuring out her English accent,

Making allowances for the English

Which remained alien.

And the British hate Europe,

So they became the most powerful of Europe.

They aren’t the most powerful

So they became Americans,

Hating us in their sophistication;

And loving us as they beg us towards the throne.

They’ll keep the crown.

And just to make the annexation complete,

England became a melting pot of races.

That or American-blue eyes are the most racist,

And the most believed tolerant.



And the little man with his sonnets

Was horrified;

This isn’t poetry!

Its meaning!

Not even cultured,

Just paradox.

Not even patriotic,

Just of nation(s).

Author's Notes/Comments: 

please critique this poem.

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