I tend to neglect you
on the regular
I constantly abuse you
using words to twist
and turn
my feelings
to manipulate the
outcome in my favor
you still stand by my side
even when I am snarred
in an aphasic state and
say things I know are wrong
sometimes out of frustration
I bruise you over and over until
parts of my hands turn blue
I often leave you for days
at a time with nothing to
say offering no excuse for
my actions
though you endure all of
my abuse and frustrations
our love is sustained
and mine for you grows
even stronger
you allow me to come back
again and again
you take it from me
again and again
for this I am in love with you
for your commitment to me
I will forever continue to
manipulate and create
new ways to present you
to the world
Hello Raili
its been a while since I last read some of your pieces...this one took it to a new level...love your word usage in this one....
nita
Loved it!
Loved it!
Loved it!
This is truly how I feel about poetry. This reminds me of a piece I wrote called Dear Poem....Raila as always, I love your stuff!
RaiLa - DAMN, I think Soul said it best in her shout for this poem. This piece is just beautiful. You are a wonderful, soulful, caring man to be able to pour your heart onto the page like this. AMAZING. MUCH LOVE, always...Martina
You really out did your self with this one. Still can't find the words I want to use......
i like this piece.. clever.
You KNOW I am Lovin' this Joint'. This is my type of flow. You have captured the feelings and experiences of a true writer with this one. I find myself trying to choose a particular part to love the most in this poem, but I can't! From the first line to the last... is all Love.
I'm on your page now, and you're spittin' out joints faster than I can read them! You go Cuz! I must admit that I was waiting for you to post some new stuff... good lookin' out.
BABY LUV...YOU'VE WRITTEN SOME HOT ASS SHIT...BUT THIS
THIS IS COMPLETE AND UTTER BLISS. MY SOUL SHEDS TEARS TO THESE WORDS...WITHOUT A DOUBT LOVELY.