2 December 2004 - 3:45pm — Donielle Johnson (not verified)
R! I am feelin' this senryu! I have missed reading your inspiring pieces. I am going to be adding new senryus to my site in the next few days. I have written over 50 new erotic ones!
26 April 2004 - 5:54pm — Katherine Neitz (not verified)
this one made me laugh for some reason. I really like the way you write, no matter what you're writing. You asked what one of my poems was about. It's about pain that I felt when I was betrayed by a friend and lost trust in my husband. It took many months to regain trust and top heal pain. And during it, I just couldn't help but write it down. Ya know.
Kate :)
R! I am feelin' this senryu! I have missed reading your inspiring pieces. I am going to be adding new senryus to my site in the next few days. I have written over 50 new erotic ones!
Donielle
http://www.doniellemonique.com
this one made me laugh for some reason. I really like the way you write, no matter what you're writing. You asked what one of my poems was about. It's about pain that I felt when I was betrayed by a friend and lost trust in my husband. It took many months to regain trust and top heal pain. And during it, I just couldn't help but write it down. Ya know.
Kate :)
Exactly so. Your Haiku is excellent, and an excellent observation on life.
Starward
Damn RaiLa you are layin it down w/ the haiku man!
This was awesome...
Great piece of writing, Poet
capturing a snapshot of the anti-climax.