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I don't have time to

feed your ego and love you

you need to pick one

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:26am
©7 November 2002 - 12:43am — raila
25 April 2003 - 4:23pm — ultimprv
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nice
real nice

Much Respect, One Love

14 November 2002 - 6:38pm — Tawanda Roberson (not verified)
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I like this luv...I'm feeling all of this shit. Short but FULL OF EMOTIONS. Damn luv....

9 November 2002 - 12:05am — strawberrylagoon (not verified)
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well said RaiLa!

8 November 2002 - 12:28am — Aaron Burks (not verified)
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This is nice work man I have writen some Haiku, but I don't think it is right on point, good work.
A1

12 January 2008 - 8:02pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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I like your piece but I don't totally agree. I think when you love someone it also feeds their ego but is subtle silent sense.Feeding in the sense of making them feel good to know they are loved..