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She took what I had

She gave me what God gave her

and sanctified me

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:25am
©4 May 2004 - 6:43pm — raila
17 May 2004 - 5:48pm — Donielle Johnson (not verified)
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BEAUTIFUL! I love it!

11 May 2004 - 12:25am — Joy Williams (not verified)
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This piece is beautiful. Simply Lovely. It evokes a sweetness to the act, but at the same time a deep passion of sharing the most intimate interaction between two people. Man you've inspired me to write... Luv Ya!

4 May 2004 - 6:44pm — Tawanda Roberson (not verified)
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MAN!!! YOU ARE MAKING ME WANT TO WRIGHT. LOVELY!