The Closeness of You

I would think this may sound familiar

You would say it's kinda peculiar

But this is the only way I can express

Adoration will full of comprehension



I owed you in ways that I can

I have disturbed you and the silence prevailing in your life's span

I asked favor in every endeavor

Probably I can't expect anything but understanding



My solemn appreciation can't burst out from my chest

Even my heart suffered a bit impulsive crest

I accused myself of delinquency

I pretended this would bear not intention to me

But I may sound crazy if I do it intentinally



I dared to fish-out you precious attention

But I can't just go beyond the zenith of your creation

I bestowed the power and dominion on you

I then took care the friendship that I intended to you



My speculations lasted for a moment

My devotion ceased in just a split

Your soft-spoken voice currently flowing

Airing message that isn't confusing

Neither your acts nor your moves

Can change the views in just a groove



Your confession truly arouse

My enthusiasm to come a close

You always show me the best of yours

The things I can't trade nor ignore

CLOSENESS OF YOU I cannot endorse..

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Whew...this poem was the product of my first relationship....Look what love can do..it can make you up high in the clouds, it can destroy your mere silence..it can make you wild at times..but one most important lesson out of this..was I learned how to move on..Nothing is permanent in this very world we live in but only change takes its daily course....to the person I have loved..thanks for making me realized those things....I still love you but its just that we cannot live together forever.

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