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Balloon
Hate rages inside of constricted veins
Bones snap back, break
Loved ones are the cause of all pains
Babies are drowned when cries grab at our throats
Silence is brought up when their bodies float
I am like them with nowhere to go
This plague it spreads
My tendons fray
Flesh ripped to shreds
Splattered red
My everyday
And with this head I hang
Below my bed black seeps through blue
As I fall to the floor of my room
No one knows I am in the depths of an internal hell
That I am becoming Doom
I feel the burn from liquid flames
Pour out of my face
I won’t be a waste of space
My exile shall be soon
I will be a contribute to the Earth
So pound my heart down into the undergrounds
Let go of my soul like a balloon
Wow! This got me praying for
Wow! This got me praying for you! It's sickening and powerfully affecting there is something about this write that gets to the gore *I mean core of you the imagery is shocking just as the metaphors... You just have to read this one folks to truly understand and brilliantly disturbing write! Equally special is the last line which just spins you on your head with the perfect juxtaposition... Interesting gripping write, bravo! CheerSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you :) I'm glad you
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it! And don't worry I'm not feeling this way anymore...faaaaarrrr from it!! I wrote this like 8 months ago lol.
Raeleyn S.
Thank fricken goodness! ;)
Thank fricken goodness! ;) great write though! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."