Thinking of you
& only you.
You say that things
between us will last
a long time,
the only thing lasting is
the pain in you heart.
Will you let
me in your heart?
I wanna feel your pain
& fell your joy.
You say that it could
have been official, but
the moment left;
if you feel us as one,
it doesn't leave,
it stays in your heart
until we are one.
Our happiness together
doesn't leave bcuz the
moment left,
I feel you;
Do you feel me?
I really liked this one too... keep up the good work!
The next step ... I like it. It's well expressed.