Maintain a focused frequency

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PAPER PURSUIT

 

With conflicting energies

Bouncing about, shouting

In a bloody boxing ring,

There can be no victory;

But a shared sense

Of pardoning penance

Perchance proceeds

To purify the parasitical

Pathogenic presence.

 

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I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY

I like it alot! BUT HIGHLY UNLIKELY FOR A PARDON ME THINKS.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Bouquet of thanks

I guess it depends on the overall

Tolerance levels of those involved


bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

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Yes I gues that's when we say

Yes I gues that's when we say it's all relative... is relative a cop-out not willing to be truly in the space designed by this well crafted poem? Jow disrespect ful to the author! Unforgivable! ;) 

I will try.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."