abed you are
day and night
dancing images
once a delight
sunset on a
tuesday night
you called out
gave me a fright
i rushed to your room
and at first sight
a leak i spotted
sent me to flight
a patch placed
upon the sight
did not hold
in it's own right
the internal pressure
was the water's right
to open the flood gates
for a non-stop flight
you and your bed
must now make right
parting ways
on this very night
You are proving to be a match for me in many ways ... especially in words ... as for the deeds????????? How about a big dream partner hello! Unbridled love ... will loose the chains that bind, Relief first starts in your mind, When your thoughts turn to amorous adventures in store ... Waiting for the magic of your kiss to open up love's door, The key to freedom lies inside your heart ... but one turn will let love come in, nightly splendor forever more Unshackled, unbound ... now love found And freedom for wild, crazy, fresh love to overwhelm your heart. LET IT BEGIN! The journet to fantasy land is about to begin, Open up love's door.
Hhehehe....and from this, spawned my poem: I Thought I Thought... look out for it, Linda. it's slanted to be posted 3 weeks from now~
Great poem, Linda! I love it, hehe. We finally had to put our water bed out to pasture; woke up swimming one too many times. Enjoyed reading your poem; had me wondering what??? was going on right up 'til the end. Just great! Shirley :)
I like the way you play with words in this poem. This poem would make a great riddle. You made me think, but I was not correct in my assumption of the meaning of this poem. Well done.
Linda, Awww!! I have had this happen :) But now I am like the Princess & the pea.. and I have to sleep on a feather bed~ :) This may be something looked back on with a smile? Any humorous moments in it all? Or just back aches? Thoughtful poem, Linda! :)