My Leave, I Take

Alas!

  Dear precious friends

  These words now penned

  Ink of my veins on

      paper writ.



Alas!

  Show no sorrow

  Shed not tears

  Lest emotions befit

  I take my leave.



Oh!

  Dear precious friends

  I will take thy cup

  of hemlock now, and bid ye

  farewell.



Oh!

  Follower of Socrates,

  your words pierce through

  my heart, yet fear the pains

  of death.






Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by a critique I had written.

10/02/01

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salphire5's picture

Wow! Potent stuff! Nice vein of unity running through this. Keep the ink pumping. Leave that hemlock alone. I look forward to reading more of your intriguing works.