Catch me. hold me.
Hold me, catch me.
Please, please. please...
don't let me fall.
A circle of life
from beginning to end.
No doors, no holes,
no flaws that I recall.
A mystery of one's being
from seed to full bloom.
Nurture, encourage, pray,
The final days are...
unyielding.
Help me find the way.
I kept reading several times. You have managed to pour your feelings in a Lovely style.
Catch me! Hold me! Tie me down if you want to! Let your loving arms enfold me and there's nothing I wouldn't do, Squeeze me, fill me with desire, Just light my candle and get ready for the fire! No PUPPET MAN again! The package unwrapped no strings attached. Let love begin! No more mean, immoral depravity, or nights filled with iniquity, I seek the heated ecstacy of your embrace! Let love begin! Let love begin! Yes no bondage my lady fair I'm free for your sweet embrace, Please accept my gentle touch and you'll wear a smile upon your face Yes, you freed me from my bondage and devilish obsessions, Now I'm ready now for your love lessons, Let my foreplay respond in kind by kissing your eternal forest of mankind, And swimming in your turgent sea of bliss, Oh yes! I surrender myself to your freedom of unbounded L O V E Bill
A heart-felt plea: save me , protect me, be there for me. the path is so narrow and I am so afraid. Very nicely expressed Linda. A pleasure to read. Good work again. Fleur
HI~ beautiful writings L&P
The words have a lovely rhythm, and contain a feeling I can relate to.
Again,beautiful,i just love the way you choose your words Linda i only went to the 6th grade ,had to work bla bla same as many ! anyway when i'm writing and feel in the zone & going good i use the most simple words because i go around words that i cant spell,but in some way i like how just that happens,thats why i guess i'm impressed with YOUR WORDS & they shine TRUE L&P
Very nicely expressed. Yes we should all help each other find the way... just wonder why I am so stingy?
Linda, Thank you for this lovely poem. I find that your thoughts run much as mine do in that they express life in ways that make others think and help them to see their life in a different way. OR in that when they read them they stop for a minute and say to themselves, Yes, That is what I feel but could never quite express. Thank You for sharing a small piece of yourself with us all, and keep up the beautiful work. Oh yes, I must express my Thanks for your critique of my work. It was very uplifting and and encouraging. :-) poetoftheheart, Donna Lynne Myers Cornett!