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Drop in on Love

Down the rutted road

just across the bridge

over slow roll water

of Sour Grass Creek,

I dropped in on love

in a peaceable place

where all human race

is one human jewel.

I dropped in on love

and kicked off my shoes,

set free my dusty toes

from hollow ground so cruel.

 

Just drop in on love,

drop in on love.

 

 

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©15 September 2017 - 1:13pm — Psysped
9 March 2022 - 3:59pm — allets
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Balanced Lines

"Where all human race

is one human jewel..."

5/5 1 repeated word, a metaphor, a wish as a hope. 

Rest of poem - nirvana theme. A "peaceable place ". Stop by - recharge, the toes wash to enevitably dust again. Love is a wondrous place to visit.
~A~

 

 

15 September 2017 - 3:01pm — allets
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Kickin' off ma shoes

Glad to see you posing on PostPoems - allets -

 

 

 

16 September 2017 - 4:23pm — Psysped
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Thanks

I appreciate your comment. Randy

15 September 2017 - 2:18pm — Blackwingedbird
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'rutted road' such a memory

'rutted road' such a memory it brings up for me.

16 September 2017 - 4:24pm — Psysped
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Thanks

I appreciate your comment. Randy

15 September 2017 - 1:14pm — osiriss-
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roll slow know bible

roll slow know bible