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   :*)               Laying on my bed                     :*)



                       fast asleep



                       at midnight



                    the time is right



    :*)        As i pour  some choclate                    :*)





               syrup all over you cause





          licking u is what i really want to do ,









                       I get caught





                     into your body heat





                 babe u make me so complete

                      



                    

               grab me close and work





               the rest leaving me so







              very happy  and impressed



                  





               spread my legs nice and wide





                as my cream leaks down the





               sides of my thighes pouring







          out of my vagina like a honey river





              ready to explode love juices





               dripping and pouring all over







          on your pure marbles of sweet  destiny ,







               Babe it is that u i aim to please







            and forfill all of your every needs





            



                       with all ease ,

                      





                  suck or lick on my breast



                

           touching on your soft muscle mmmm





          chest is what i love to do the best .

                  





                







                  



                    

            





    





                 Wrote on March 1,2009

                 Love ya sweetie 12:35 .

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this one one
night when i   was thinking and dreamin
about my babe I had to get
up and write this one
I see why I do my best
poetry writing at  the strike of Midnight Hee Hee Love u sweetie kisse

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meso's picture

lovely erotic piece. someone

lovely erotic piece. someone can feel you from far.milton.


milton

allets's picture

U Hold Back

The buzz words are less important inside a report of the action - to be inside the action makes it erotic for reader, for audience. You stand back, the observer - the imagery is prosaic as if writing in a diary or an op ed. There's got to a simile in your mind somewhere. A metaphor - cum, legs spread wide? or like this:

.

Underwater Dream

.

Sweat was running downstream

like a river full of your toungue

seeking every pore.

.

I awake wet as laundry when

the washer breaks down

and I flood the floor with

hair to hair, skin molten bliss

as if the memory of the dream

was less wet and more a merging

of souls accompanied by release

and a few seconds of heaven.

.

~allets

07-23-13

12:05a

 

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