he came upon me
from out of no where
i got lost into the beauty
of his gorgeous brown eyes
he spread his colorfull wings
as he flew so swiftly into the breeze
to take away all of
my pain and fears away
and he said to me
i was sent down here to look out
and watch over you until the end of time
with the power Of his sharp claws
i felt safe and secure around him
for the Gods had answered my prayers and
blessed me with a guide to show me how to live right .
* this poem was written by me *
Hey there! Thanks for the critique on one of my poems! O appreciate it! I liked this Len poem of yours. My little brother and my dad are both named Len. Haha! It was creative though. I always appreciate good writing. Way to go! **2 thumbs up**