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* Firey Rain *
firey rain is pouring down burning
down everything into its path
many people try to run
from it but it burns off their
skin from their sins down within
the flames increase
as i hear people scream
i find my way to a church
that is near by i get down
upon my knees and i start to
pray up to thee faithfully
for thee to come to his peoples rescue
we look up into the sky and the firey
rain disapears into thin air as a shiny
light saves us from this powerfull storm .
* This poem was orginally written by me *
I have mixed emotions about this poem. I like that you used God as the savior and saved everyone. I really don't like that there had to be a storm in order for God to come through for us. I think God is here for us not only when there is a storm, but also when we are happy and filled with enlightenment or however you spell it.
Powerful poem. Aren't we glad that our God is a merciful God...
oh i like this poem to. its true i we need to do when we need help is to call on him and he will come. i love the left behind movie #2 because of the one part where the guys are trying to get to the people who spit fire and they pray and god stops all the bullets and people in mid air so that the two guys and go and talk to the men. It so amazing what god can do when we just ask.
as i am a strong beliver in God, i love this poem, to me it portrays how God will answer you in your time of need and how he'll always be there for you. :-D
the power of prayer
RaiLa