I swim but my feet
do not touch the bottom
my dripping tears have finally
done me in i feel my breath
grow weary & thin i cry &
scream for help but
no one comes to my rescue
my voice gets raspy & weak
as i draw near to the very end
i sink to the bottom me hateing to die
into a big river of my own shallow tears .
* This poem was orginally written By me *
OH I LOVE THIS POEM! its awesome!~
Great poem, I love the emotion.