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* Double Edged Sword *

             WE FOUGHT THE GOOD FIGHT

            AND SOMEONE HAD TO DIE SO

     I TOOK AND GOT DRESSED INTO YOUR UNIFORM

       AND I WENT OFF TO FIGHT INTO THE WAR

       IN YOUR PLACE BECAUSE IT WAS ALL

          MOST TO LATE FOR YOUR REQEST

          SO YOU COULDN'T STOP ME BECAUSE

         I D HAD ALL READY CHOSEN MY FATE

       THE DOUBLE EDGE SWORD WAS MEANT FOR YOU

         BUT I TOOK IT FOR YOU BECAUSE I

DEEPLY LOVED YOU DOWN TO THE BOTTOM OF MY ENdLESS SOUL .



               * this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i WROTE THIS POEM BECAUSE
I WAS GOING THRU ALOT
OF PAIN AMD MISERY AND
IT SHOWS AND I KNOW WHAT
IT LIKE TO HAVE PEOPLE
THAT U LOVE FIGHINGING
INTO THIS COLD CRUEL WAR

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©24 May 2004 - 6:59am — poetvg
24 May 2004 - 2:02pm — Dave Harris (not verified)
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Nicely writen !! I can see how you linked your inspiration to your poem. Life is an endless war and we will go through misery as well as pain. I feel your pain because I have been there. Keep up the writing.

24 May 2004 - 8:31am — Micheal Davis (not verified)
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This poem I think would/will have a huge effect on a lot of people, for many loved ones are over in Iraq and many loved ones are leaving to go there. I applaud you for writing this even with the pain and sorrows you are experiencing.