* Secret Crush *

                   every time that i

                gaze into your beautiful

                     brown eyes

                     i blush all

                     over the place

                    because this crush

               has completely taken over me .

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem  is  about a
woman that in love with
a  guy   that   she s
been wanting to confess
to but shes scrared to
because she cant handle
him rejectioning  her .
what would you  do if
you were  in my shoes ?

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

GET TO KNOW HIM BETTER FIRST, IF YOU STILL FEEL THE SAME AFTER A WHILE TELL HIM

Amanda S.'s picture

thanks for critiquing my poem....i hate the person i wrote about in that poem now...i realized he's a loser....i can really relate to this poem because i really likea guy rite now and he doesnt even know i exist. so i just wanted to say thanks for critiquing my poem it really means a lot!