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                   babe i wish i was safe

                  into your arms right now .

                  



                *  this piece is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about a
woman wanting  to be
in the  safety of her
mans arms right now because   she loves
him so very much i love you babe :*).   muah

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©14 December 2003 - 5:38am — poetvg
3 April 2004 - 8:02pm — poetjewnita
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cute.......short
and sweet

26 February 2004 - 12:59am — billiybob Josephine (not verified)
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nice poem.

THE SMILES GIRL ;) *) :|B

why don't you ever leave any HELPFUL critiques? all you ever put is "nice poem, peace and love, the smiles lady". that does not help at ALL, you might as well have just typed "hi" . jeeezzz...

31 October 2005 - 7:21pm — Liz Plank (not verified)
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it reminds me of a man that i was waitng for to come back from the navy. i like it