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* Bailar *

                      as we dance

                    and move our feet

                    to the sweet beat

                    we were meant to

                    to share this spe

                   acil moment together.



             *   this poem was orignally  *

                     written by me    

Author's Notes/Comments: 

it feels so good when
you dance with the one
you love because it feel
s like you and him are
floating on air and it
is a very special   feeling this one song
inspired me to write   this poem. it's called
(When we Dance) by Sting

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©5 December 2003 - 6:33am — poetvg
27 February 2004 - 10:43am — Fiona Graves (not verified)
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Sorry, I don't really liek this one. I prefer your other works.The whole 'move your feet to the beat' and 'floatin on air' parts just seem cliched. Try and think of some otehr imagery for it.

14 December 2003 - 3:39am — Poetic Raine (not verified)
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Nice, very nice....reads as smooth as the dance you are writing of......Poe