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Lalitlochan

                      When i look into

                      your lovely brown

                       eyes i see  us

                       in love forever.

                     this poem is all mine

Author's Notes/Comments:

*Love At First Sight* is
a poem about seeing the
love of your life for
the real person they
are body soul and mind .
and loving them for all
that money and material
things means nothing to me .true love can last
forever until the day u
die it means alot to me.
your heart beating nexted
to me, your amazing smile
your gorgeous brown eyes.
your soft wavy hair your
sexy cherry tasty kisses,
your warm teddy bear hugs
now the whole world knows
why i love my prince hee
hee one love sweetie :*D.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:57am
©21 June 2002 - 9:07am — poetvg

7 July 2003 - 2:45pm — Cherie~ Trager (not verified)

Such a lovely piece. Short, and to the point. Those can be more powerful than the more elaborate ones. Thank you for sharing. Cherie~

16 June 2003 - 1:49pm — raila

This piece is very warm!

RaiLa

15 May 2003 - 11:33am — charisma

Very lovely penned *s*

30 April 2003 - 12:55am — ~!* Dreams Live On *!~ (not verified)

it good

17 April 2003 - 9:12pm — LINDA JOHNSON (not verified)

What a gentle piece and reaps of love. I am sure it was loved by the one you wrote it for....keep flowing...Cover

22 March 2003 - 5:38am — Irina K (not verified)

i think i've experienced it... but who knows.

16 February 2003 - 2:43pm — Jedi Trowa (Kiyoshi) Barton (not verified)

Short but meaningful. I'm not sure if I believe in love at first sight. I've never been in love but you make it sound wonderful. This poem brought a smile to my face.

24 January 2003 - 6:18pm — gentle