The Truth Will Set You Free*

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The Truth Will Set You Free*

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             If you only knew the

             truth about how much

             i love you we will be

             together forever some

              day in the future .

           THIS POEM IS MY ORIGINAL WORK

Author's Notes/Comments:

If you only knew the
Truth. is a poem based
up on the feelings
i hid from someone i was
scared to tell him . i didnt think the guy would
undertstand my feelings
about why i cared and loved him so much . i was so scared to tell i
hid these feelings for him for years .and the sad part of this story is
he walked away and left
town he moved far away .
i lost him for good i never told him the truth.
and i regret it i was so
foolish i messed up that
could had been happy ending :*) yep yep yep .

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:57am
©20 June 2002 - 12:45pm — poetvg

7 February 2005 - 5:59pm — Megan Estes (not verified)

thanks for your critique of my poem. i'd like to say i really understood this poem. i too kept my feelings hidden, and though i eventually told the guy what i felt, it never worked out like it would have if i had told him the first time...keep writing :)

24 May 2003 - 3:36am — Jason Resno (not verified)