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* Broken Heart *

                   the pain from a broken

                    heart can last for

                   several long years all

                   of those lies you told

                   me that is what hurt me

                   the most, if you really

                   didnt love me the truth

                   would have been so much

                   better on me from the start.

                   before our relationship got

                   so serious to that point but

                   now it is too late i feel like

                   i want to die i no longer have

                   the heart to love anymore. my body

                   and soul has became cold and empty

                   i thought i would never get to this

                   part but i was so very wroung to

                   believe that. but i will get over

                   it someday in the future without you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is written
by  me because i actully
went thru pain like this

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©28 June 2002 - 12:00pm — poetvg
30 January 2003 - 4:45am — Tara Sills (not verified)
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This is so true.

29 January 2003 - 3:34am — Cletus Hardiman (not verified)
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A broken heart is "sort of" like Humpty-dumpty--it can't be put back together again. But, remember...

Nothing is forever, and all wounds do heal, but some unfortunately do leave a scar!

Hang in there, girl!!! :)

Keep on writing, and sharing of course!

Cletus Hardiman

11 December 2002 - 4:34am — Rashidah Inge (not verified)
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I real Like this poem.

26 November 2002 - 7:50am — audrey (not verified)
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I enjoyed reading your peotry especially Broken Heart I've been there from time to time myself. Keep up the good work and hope to hear from you in the future..

sincerly
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24 November 2002 - 2:06pm — Jenni Kalicharan (not verified)
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This is so sad, but very nice...Jenni

15 November 2002 - 7:39am — White Shadow (not verified)
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Sounds good that you can get over it. I have felt that way once or twice myself, keep it up and thanks for reading my work, hope you liked it

9 July 2002 - 1:29am — misty lackey (not verified)
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it is hard to heal a broken heart, it does take time to get over the wounds and pain, it seems as though years down the road things does get better, although every realtionship has its ups and downs the first broken heart can be healed and it is better to deal with the pain.

2 February 2003 - 4:16pm — Eurypterid Antares (not verified)
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You capture the agony, the loneliness with such utter perfection...it breaks my heart to read it....

Thanks for sharing this...