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* Broken Wings *
i long to fly
high among the
beautiful skies
fix my broken
wings so i can
sing and to fin
ally be free
from a life of
pure misery .
* i wrote this poem *
This is really good i liked it
I LOVE THIS POEM! its awesome
I love how this portrays something beyond writing, that can't be explained, only imagined. :)
hey i feel dis poem keep it up 1
this is a great poem. and you are an even better writer.
when people think from the soul, things like this happen....good job
Gail,
what a beautiful write... to be able to fly away from that which causes you hurt and pain would be so nice... if only. I love the title and the poem fits so well...
Peace and Love..
Judy
Oh sweetie! I really like this one. I can relate so much to the words. Good job hun!<3
This has a nice flow. It has a feel like a mix between some of the Chinese poets and e.e. cummings. nice job,
george
I wonder how a gal who likes to smile can be in misery. I guess it happens to the best of us. I like the short verses you publish from the Bible. They are quick and to the point. I see them as your words of encouragment to get you through such times as your poem here describes. I see you talk and open up with your poems. I like it
this poem as a good meaning behind it, good job buddy!!!
Liby
Short, simple. Needs nothing else!!! You said it all.
Amy
Gentle is the night♥
beautiful. i share your passion to fly from the misery. thanks for the love on my page.
much love and respect
~chris