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January 2003 Poetry

You feel like,

you could use some lovin.’

So follow me,

I’ll make you feel,

like you’ve never felt before.

You don’t have to do anything,

just let me do all the work.

Relax baby,

you’ll feel better soon.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 1-14-03. Y'all can use your imaginations on this one. I know I did while I was writing it! lol

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©28 January 2003 - 2:43am — hccgirl04
28 January 2003 - 2:42pm — Ernest Bevans (not verified)
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I enjoyed This splendid little poem
it reminds me of a golden oldie:

"I'm in the mood for love
Simply because you're near me
Funny, but when you're near me
I'm in the mood for love"

Your poems is a delightful little twist
on an age old primal urge to be loved
or as the boys in the hills say; "loved up".

10 February 2003 - 3:09am — Jay Roder (not verified)
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Okay! Sounds good!