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Words So Sweet

Words never ever said to me.

I heard for the first time.

Not a second thought.

Not a stumble or mumble.

I heard it loud and clear.

And you were so sincere.

You were quite dear.

So eager..., wanting with all your might.

You were out of sight.

You became my love, when I heard those wounderful words.

HOW CAN I HELP YOU.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

how can i put it. mmmmmm!! some people look for "I love you" and that is good we strive to hear it. but how many times have someone said how can i help you and ment it. how many time have someone actualy fallowed through and wanted with all their heart to help you and make you happy. well this is what this poem is about...

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:34am
©30 November 2003 - 10:35pm — poetjewnita
3 April 2004 - 7:14pm — poetvg
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awesome work
on this poem

11 December 2003 - 2:09am — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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I think we all long to hear those words spoken sincerely. It's nice to have someone offer help instead of just taking.

3 December 2003 - 4:09pm — Corey Fox (not verified)
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beautiful and true!

one love Corey & co