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A ...
A lie
A little closer to fate we catch on to
A Word
A little more hurt; the closer we get to crying
A Tear
A little closer we want to get to dieing
A Dream
A little closer we come to Heaven
A Hope
A wish that will never come true
A love
A object of pain, driven to be sorrow in devout ways of strong emotion
I really like this because of how much you get accomplished in so few lines. i especially love when
you say
"A little more hurt; The closer we get to crying
A Tear"
that's really cool
that type of descriptive style is inspiring, i think it would be nice if i imply that into some of the things i write from now on MORE strongly. that's a really cool poem
-Legend-