WHY IS IT I ALWAYS END UP FEELING USED WORN TORN BATTERED ABANDONED AND BRUISED IS IT BECAUSE I DONT GIVE AS MUCH I HOLD TO MUCH BACK OR IM NOT GOOD ENOUGH EACH TIME IM USED ITS LIKE A VICIOUS ATTACK ALWAYS DONE TO MY FACE NEVER BEHIND MY BACK IT TEARS AWAY AT MY SOUL WHICH ONLY WANTS TO BE LOVED GIVE LOVE BE CARESSED AND CONSOLED I GIVE MY ALL ONLY TO HAVE MORE OF ME STRIPPED AWAY HOW MUCH MORE CAN I TAKE DAY TO DAY MY NO'S GO UNANSWERED MY PROTESTS IGNORED AM I NOT A PERSON WHO SHOULD BE ADORED WHO DESERVES AN OUNCE OF RESPECT YEAH I CRY ALOT BUT WHAT DO YOU EXPECT WHEN PEOPLE SAY THEY LOVE YOU SO YOU LOVE THEM BACK YOU TRUST THEM NOW HERE COMES ANOTHER ATTACK!
I think you should see a publisher, or right a poetry book, these are to great to waste hun.
~babygirl~
good good good u spelled everything right i think n used good grammer n lots of feeling so sad tho