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Not worthy
Where do i begin?
Maybe with the facts that show on my skin
Maybe with the facts that show on my eyes
Just how sad things can be
Just how bad things can seem
Is it not just me who feels the emptiness?
Or am i truely all alone?
Maybe i'm doomed to be alone
Or maybe its just me
Maybe people see things in me that i can't see
Maybe its just these dimmed lights that shine down on me
The lights that try to show me the way of life
But i tend to stay away
For i am not worthy
Dont Be!
Everybody feels emptiness once in a while... It's good to vent out thru a poem. It's not just you.
Just go out, mingle and think positive.
Sorry, just edit grammar a bit like "Where do I begin" instead of "can"...also emptiness is spelled with an "i".
Make some more. :)
Kiks
thanks!
thank you for the advice:) its nice to know people care about others! but this one wasnt so much venting as it was me free-versing in my head, tho it does mirror feelings of the past