Changes

Now the waves are coming

Sandy beach no more

Shells and stones are washed away

Nothing for the shore



Now the sun is setting

Goodbye to the light,

Sun kissed flowers go to rest

Settle for the night



Now the rain is falling

Droplets meet the floor

As the skies are clouding over

Sunny days no more

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Metaphorical/imagery. Sometimes things go pear-shaped.

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Laura Minns's picture

i got the whole metaphorical thingy in the poem, very well put, my poems are all so straight forward, yours r fab! x me x

Stephanie Cox's picture

The Sunny days may have gone away,
But your sunshine smile is here.
What a fantastic poem, sis.
It made me shed a tear.

This is pure excellent Terri. It's fantastic. Brilliant. Well done.

Charlotte Pattison's picture

i really like this poem, it's so cool, i love the rain so the ending was great, change was such a cool thing to write about, well done!