Now the waves are coming
Sandy beach no more
Shells and stones are washed away
Nothing for the shore
Now the sun is setting
Goodbye to the light,
Sun kissed flowers go to rest
Settle for the night
Now the rain is falling
Droplets meet the floor
As the skies are clouding over
Sunny days no more
i got the whole metaphorical thingy in the poem, very well put, my poems are all so straight forward, yours r fab! x me x
The Sunny days may have gone away,
But your sunshine smile is here.
What a fantastic poem, sis.
It made me shed a tear.
This is pure excellent Terri. It's fantastic. Brilliant. Well done.
i really like this poem, it's so cool, i love the rain so the ending was great, change was such a cool thing to write about, well done!