In life there is a river and a boat
I travel the river without control
Unable to change the flow
You are a rock in the river of life
Bending all things around your will
Yet the flow continues its course
To see, to taste, to hear, to hold
All the things that life unfolds
Is to stop the river of life
A new world unfolds itself
And a meaning is revealed
A Lifetime lived in a moment
The river continues its journey
But now I'm the rock in the river
And you ride the boat without control
A Poem by K. V.A.
Rocks, rivers, boats and
Rocks, rivers, boats and journies. I loved those metaphors. Beautiful work thanks for sharing. Welcome to our big little community of poets.I hope you will be happy here. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen
thanks, truth be told im not
thanks, truth be told im not much of a poet, I maybe wrote 4 or so about 10 years ago and i awoke today with that in my head and no one to share it with so thanks for reading and commenting i appreciate it