I write this on a deeper note
To perhaps by chance invoke
A sweeter thought than what you know
And plant a seed with time will grow
Let you ponder late at night
Of what could be and it just might
Left you twisted, both confused
I love to fly, would you come too?
Take a trip and not recover
Amazing high to have discovered
You see the writing on the wall?
Open to the truthful light
Speaking forward only right
Speaking softly in my tune
Smelling sweet my good perfume
Enter now but not return
A state of mind that truely burns
Can't comprehend what I said?
My words can twist but never bend
Flow and content is perfect, here Maria. It is the oracular quality which is so engaging. Such works are the ones that keep the attention focused. Well done.
This is a good poem...I really like it...nice work...