A Good Day

It was a good day, it was Sunday

We spent the day together

Just you and I alone



We enjoyed each other's company

We didn't argue or quarrel

We didn't even fight



We held hands and giggled

We even slipped a kiss or two

You and I together

Together a day we spent



We went to an antique shop

We toured a new home

We visited a loved one in the hospital

We ate peach ice-cream

We had dinner at a quaint little seafood place



Yes it was a good day, it was Sunday

But then came Monday....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

One good day sparked a ray of hope into this failing marriage.  But the very next day, the stark truth of reality returns...!

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poetvg's picture

ouch this
is sad
ive been
there before .

starlite_angel's picture

Geez.. this is so sad, and I can relate to it so well, I have had many good days.. but with the end of the day and the dawn of a new, things seem to change so rapidly, in the blink of an eye so to speak, and all hope of what might be, fades before your eyes. Reminds me of how I want another good day to come, oh how I miss them.
Great job, I really enjoyed this!
Peace and love always
~Robin~

Melvin Lee II's picture

Awww.how sad...
U lined up all the good things, Tricia.... before giving the sour taste at the end.
Well...but mondays can be nice too, y'know ?~
I hope u have cheered up by now.
Smilesz.

thanxs for inviting me here.
~!