Hidden Emotion

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Hidden Emotion

I see the fire in her eyes;

I’ll see it till the day she dies.

Emotion burning deep.

She has her lows, she has her highs,

no one will ever see her cries,

or ever, ever weep.

© 2011 Philip N. Carcione

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Author's Notes/Comments:

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Poetic Form: Rime Couee

This is a French form consisting of two rhymes. First there is a rhyming couplet
of normally of eight syllables then a third and shorter line.
There is another couplet that rhymes with the first one and the sixth,
shorter line that rhymes with the third line.

This gives us a suggested pattern :

x x x x x x x a
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x b
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x b

Your shorter lines can be 6 or 7 syllables long,
however, your shorter lines must be
the same length as each other
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