Author Information
LOLA MARGOT
Folder:
About the Writer 
I
am
here
in great
anticipation
to see all things
their magnet and their
splendor, I longed to reach
that is all below me, but almost
all the time slitting my throat, trying
to be heard that forsaken thoughts, hoping
for one day that that “I” at the top of this all my
case would rest complete with sweet chuckle of bliss
It gives me a vision of a marathon won.
This is Cute, an very creative :o)
I do not know what exactly is your mind but I guessed a kid would like to strive more to reach what is above or over her than what is already below her. Can you re phrase that?
Lovely
the message matches the form.
I hope the "I" at the top of
this mountain, acheives the
splendor that "I" so deserves.
Nicely written. And the format too - very creative.
This piece exposes an extremely creative mind with words and style.Unique in many ways i'd say.